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Old 12-24-2008, 07:52 PM   #1
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Power Rangers The Movie: Return Of The Ooze

First off, I want to thank all of the amazing people who have cheered me on while I have gotten this ready. Thank you for sticking through the insane teases and news reports from the set. And thank you for being excited for something that I am truly thrilled about as well.

THE RANGERS

RED RANGER
Michael Steger as Bailey Martin


Bailey is the classic good guy. He's sweet, funny, and has is always one to stand up for what he believes is good and right in the world. He's admirable, but sometimes bites off more than he can chew.

WEAPON: Power Sword
ZORD: Tyranno Tank

BLUE RANGER
Tristan Wilds as Ryan James


Always good humored, Ryan makes a joke out of anything. But between the laughs, Ryan hides a quick wit and intelligence that is unmatched by his peers.

WEAPON: Power Lance
ZORD: Tricera Cruiser

GREEN RANGER
David Henrie as Charlie Carson


Ever go to the beech and see that one guy who just seems to wear wet the right way? That's Charlie. As a surfer during the day and a rocker at night, you would never pin this guy as the stoic hero.

WEAPON: Power Axe
ZORD: Masta Tank

YELLOW RANGER
William Moseley as Sadie Mathis


Always the bleeding heart, Sadie has never been one to watching opportunity to help someone pass by without giving it a try. Where others see him as a pushover, he sees his open heart as a strength.

WEAPON: Power Daggers
ZORD: Saber Cruiser

PINK RANGER
Zena Grey as Haley Hawthorn


In every crowd there is one person standing off watching the scene, taking it all in. That's Haley. A photographer, her eyes miss nothing. During a fight, she's the one tool you know you can count on to see the key and turn it.

WEAPON: Power Bow
ZORD: Pterra Jet


RETURN OF THE OOZE TEASER POSTERS:













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THE RANGER SUITS(made from my designs by []\/[]etal_[]_ion).



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SOUNDTRACK LISTING

BEAT IT- FALLOUT BOY FEATURING JOHN MAYER
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cgmL2LeuhY4

TIME IS RUNNING OUT- MUSE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aaNfQCqclW4

NIGHT DRIVE- ALL AMERICAN REJECTS
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y7gbV7ZmmbM

INSTIGATOR- KACI BROWN
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O3EilqNMTDk

OUR TIME NOW-PLAIN WHITE TEES
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sftymVyLb-Q

OVER MY HEAD- SUM 41
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Cs_8G-jaeE

HUMAN- SKYE SWEETNAM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b5uMJmc2Yo4

CLOSE YOUR EYES- SUGARCULT
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rM_UMd8pPEc

LIGHTS AND SOUNDS- YELLOWCARD
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MnwIAXnTUpg

WHISPER TO A SCREAM- SOCIAL CODE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=18UerdqMyrY

REVOLUTION SONG- FEFE DOBSON
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=abjbDVXnd0M


MORPHER DESIGN INSPIRATION BY PRINCEOFJUPITER OF DEVIANTART.COM




THEATRICAL TRAILER


FADE IN: DARK HALLWAY

The camera slowly pushes through the dusty hallway. The light dims and lifts with a steady pulse as we dive deeper and deeper into a place that housed a great power.

FADE TO BLACK

Words come from the darkness like coming from the shadows, stepping into light.

'SOME VILLAINS NEVER DIE'

Lord Zedd and Rita Repulsa emerge from a bank of rocks. Ivan looks around, hoping for something to cast his evil spell on. He is joined by Goldar, Mordant, Thrax, and Scorpina..

BLACK SCREEN

FADE IN: FLOOR OF COMMAND CENTER

We pan down the computer console before grazing over the chest of Alpha 5.

FADE TO BLACK

The words come from the shadows just as before.

'SOME POWER NEVER FADES'

FLASH CUT:

We see bits a pieces of the new ranger suits.

Quick flash cuts of the rangers holding up their morphers. Each one bursts into a brilliant colored light.

The ranger’s flash onto screen in a comic book style parade of single shots.

The Green Ranger

The Pink Ranger

The Blue Ranger

The Yellow Ranger

The Red Ranger


BLACK

FADE IN: VIEWING CLOBE

The viewing globe flickers to light and slowly falls onto a bright cityscape thriving in the night. This is Angel Grove, California.

BLACK

The words slink from the darkness as the words before

'AND SOME HEROES'

FLASH CUT:
The camera moves closer and closer to the city of angel grove. It transitions to a helicopter shot hovering over the town.

The camera pans out to look at the stars just in time to see a huge comet of ice heading straight at the camera. Just as it gets close to collision with the POV-

BLACK

The words dont fade, they are just there, light glowing from the metallic text.

'NEVER QUIT'

CUT TO BLACK

FADE IN: TUBE

We pull back from a close view of Zordon’s tube to see the rangers standing around his tube in deep concentration. His words are steady and ominous.

ZORDON
Rangers, you must act quickly the planet is in grave danger!

CUT BACK TO ANGEL GROVE SKY

The comet soars past the screen and we follow it down to Angel Grove beach.

CUT TO: EARNIES BEACHSIDE CAFÉ

The café erupts in panic with the rangers inside. The comet hits the beach outside with an explosion of water and sand.

CUT TO: COMET SITE

We see the comet clearly now. It’s like a huge chunk of ice. And just barely, you can see something stirring inside. It’s a deep plum liquid, almost black with an oily sheen.

CUT BACK TO: COMMAND CENTER

We pan past each ranger. Their stoic gaze at their mentor highlighted in the gentle rise and fall of the pulsing command center lights.

ZORDON
Ivan Ooze was a monster. He made it his mission to destroy Earth from the inside out, infecting it’s inhabitants with his ooze.

CUT TO:
Flashes of normal citizens who have been covered in ooze and mutated into black beasts with sharp claws and vicious fangs.

CUT BACK TO: COMMAND CENTER

ZORDON
You must stop him before it’s too late. It’s up to you to save the world, Power Rangers.

CUT TO: VARIOUS SCENES

Haley pulls off a dazzling mid air sommersalt and lands in a split before lifting herself off the ground upside down to spin. Her legs, in a fury of pink, knock a large group of Ooze Men off their feet. She stands to her feet.

HALEY
Admit it, you’re impressed.

CUT TO:
Sadie running from a group of Ooze men, he flips off of a wall and lands behind them.

SADIE
C’mon guys, follow the leader!

With those words he pulls out his Power blaster and shoots the chain holding up a wrecking ball. In a split second the Ooze men are crushed in a splash of purple Ooze.

CUT TO:

Ryan scaling up scaffolding in a dizzying frenzy. Followed on both sides by Ooze Men. He finally reaches the top and the three of them go into fisticuffs. In a quick reaction he knocks the two villains together and they fall off the wooden platform and land on the crag of rocks below in a splat.

RYAN
You know what they say, you ooze you lose!

CUT TO:

Charlie is surrounded by seven Ooze Men. One goes in for a punch. Instead of a block, he catches the guy and swings him around in a circle, knocking the circle out in the process.

CUT TO:

The camera rises up from the boots of Bailey. The red ranger. He is brandishing his power sword. Pan around to see him facing off against Goldar.

The two clash by swords. Bailey gets in one good slash before being tossed through a brick wall, revealing a lab.

CUT TO:

The rangers regrouping from a harsh hit. We move past them to reveal two more rangers in Purple and Orange.

Ivan approaches from behind them in all his disgusting glory.

IVAN
I see you’ve met my children.


FLASH CUTS:

Fire, brimstone, basically hell on earth.

The ranger’s suits disappear.

Ivan reigning over a mass of Ooze Beasts.

The Purple ranger revealing her face, standing next to a crushed tube containing Zordon laying inside.

The Orange ranger standing Opposite of the Yellow Ranger, usure of his destiny.

Lord Zedd tackling the Pink Ranger to the ground and holding his staff to her throat.

The Green Ranger rushing through a group of Ooze Men, trying his hardest to get at something just out of sight.

The Blue Ranger being beaten down by Ivan.

The Red Ranger Rushing at the screen, slashing with his Power Sword.

BLACK

POWER RANGERS: RETURN OF THE OOZE

BLACK

IVAN
(voice over)
Welcome To My Nightmare.

CHRISTMAS DAY

The final sound is the familiar chime of the communicator alert.


Without any further adue....

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Old 12-24-2008, 07:52 PM   #2
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In a time of great strife, a
legendary interdimensional being
known as Zordon, came to the city
of Angel Grove to establish a
vanguard in the never ending
struggle against evil. with the
aid of his trusted assistant,
Alpha 5, the noble master sought
out five extraordinary teenagers
and gave them the power to
transform into an unstoppable
fighting force. In time of great
need, the young heroes could now
call upon colossal assault
vehicles known as "Zords". while
the identity of the five remained
a guarded secret, their
courageous exploits soon became
the stuff of Legend, earning them
the title The Power Rangers.




It’s a wonderful day in Angel Grove California, the sun is shining bright over the rolling green hills of Angel Grove Park in the center of the sprawling metropolis. To the untrained eye, one would think that this is your typical community. Kids are running with kites, dogs barking joyfully, and a group of every day teens toss a football between them. We close in on the group and see them even closer. Each one an individual in their own right.

To an outside view nobody would think these kids would be friends. A jock, a rebel, a joker, a photographer, and a kind heart. All five of them enjoying the day.

Sitting on the ground, reading from a copy of ‘Sense and Sensibility’. is Sadie at 16 he shines brightest out of the group with honey blonde hair and green eyes. His big heart and welcoming soul don’t always leave him in the best place. Often leaving his heart on his sleeve, he would seem to be an easy target, if it weren’t for his best friend Charlie.

The football soars through the air at a breakneck speed. Sadie looks up just in time to see it heading right for his head. Right as it’s about to make contact a heavy body rolls onto the ground in front of him, intercepting it.

“AH!!” Sadie throws his book up, hoping not to feel any sort of impact. After a second he lowers it to see a smiling face.

“No worries Sadie, I gotcha covered” His voice bounces jubilantly.

Sadie laughs and smiles with a sarcastic swoon. “Oh Charlie, My hero.”

Charlie is 17, is tall, muscular, Australian, and incredibly imposing. If it weren’t for Sadie, he would never really stand out from the corners of Angel Grove High he usually finds himself in. His brooding personality and impending looks would normally scare people away. He gently tosses the football to-

17 year old Ryan was one of those people who was regularly frightened by Charlie. His deep brown skin and black hair glowed with his bright smile on the warm day. Humor was always his way of dealing with the problems in life. Not only did it help him get, by but it also gained him some amazing friends. Like Bailey, 17, with bright eyes and olive skin, Bailey is the guy you look at and just know he’s a good kid. He’s always willing to give it his all, and determined to see anything through.

Seeing all of this through the lens of her camera is Haley, 16. Her long flowing red hair is nothing but a reflection to her fiery spirit. Her drive truly completes this group of close friends. Each one of them brings out something truly remarkable in the other. The real thing, is they’re more than just friends. They’re a team.

Haley lifts her camera up to her eye. “Hold that pose! It’s perfect for the yearbook!” She pushes a long strand of hair behind her ear and waits for the click of the camera.

Ryan pauses mid throw. “You know, if you keep doing this I’ll never get a good throw in!”

Bailey laughs heartily, jabbing at his best friend. “Sure, blame it on the camera!”

On a seemingly normal day, the teens goof around as usual. Watching from the outside you would think that this was nothing more than a noxema commercial. Until the ground begins to rumble and screams echo from a distance.

You see, Angel Grove isn’t your normal city, it’s home to something extraordinary. And these every day teens, are more than meets the eye.

All five of them stop in their tracks, exchanging knowing glances. Just as they begin to shrug off the noise, a crowd of frightened citizens rushes over the hill.

Avoiding the large throng of people, the teens group together. Bailey leans in to his close friends. “So much for a day off!”

Just as the crowd clears, something more rises over the hill, this time moving a bit slower. It’s a group of grotesque looking rock creatures. Their faces are sharp and angular as if they were chiseled out of a sickly gray stone. Behind the crag of a facial structure are red burning eyes. They’re putties, foot soldiers of Lord Zedd and his wife Rita Repulsa.

Zedd and his kingdom were notorious around the galaxy. Once they were of intergalactic nobility, but when war broke out Zedd sold his soul to gain more power to enslave his opposing armies. He had destroyed countless civilizations before setting his targets on earth.

What looked like an unprotected trophy ready to be added to his shelf held a powerful secret.

The teens stood together unaffected. This was just another day at the office for them. These are no regular teenagers. These five are non other than the Power Rangers. A superhuman fighting force in charge of protecting earth from Lord Zedd and his armies of evil space aliens.

Without any hesitation the rangers charge forth into the group of stone warriors. With a dizzying array of punches and kicks they make quick work of a the first wave of foot soldiers. But more and more of them come forth. Just as the teenagers are ready to give in, they feel a surge of power that shoots an electricity through their veins. Like a backup generator it pushes them forward.

Using his strength, Charlie rushes through a line of putties, using one of their own as a shield. The thing about these sorts of creatures is that they’re deeply stupid, as well as incredibly fragile. It made them vulnerable to fast attacks.

Coming up behind Charlie in a somersault is Haley. She uses her momentum to land a double footed kick into the chest of a stone attacker. With the force of a truck he whips back into a few of his comrades, each of them crumbling into pieces.

Haley smiles to herself, coyly. “Five putties…”

Ryan delivers a heavy punch to a puttie’s face, knocking it clean off it’s neck, then follows through by flipping it’s heavy body over his shoulder into a group of soldiers, crumbling them into bits as well.

Ryan finishes her sentence. “One stone”

Dodging the remnants of puttie parts, Sadie flips head over heels, all the while dodging two of his own adversaries in the process. He lands in a split and ducks. Both putties at his sides end up knocking each other’s heads off with heavy punches to the face. Sadie then jumps up to his feet.

“What do you know… two putties, no stone” He tosses the wavy blonde hair out of his eyes. “Beat that!”

Bailey stands warily, surrounded in a circle by seven putties. “I can beat that.”

Just as the words leave his mouth, a puttie charges him. Thinking fast Bailey jumps over the lunging glob of clay and rolls to the ground before popping back up to his feet, delivering a quick uppercut to the putties to his left and right.

As if like clockwork the putties begin to come at him one by one, each one’s eyes glowing with a ferocity unmatched by the last. Each puttie is dispatched just as quickly as the last with a swift hit from Bailey. Just when he seemed to have taken the last one out, another arrived.

Charlie had just pummeled through a few when he saw Bailey in the thick of the footmen. “Hey Bailey? Need some assistance?”

“The thought crossed my mind.” Bailey said between grunts.

Charlie looks to Sadie. “What do you say? Crouching mammoth, flying tiger?”

“Let’s rock it!” Sadie runs towards Charlie, who then falls to his back and angles his feet up. Sadie then launches himself into the air towards his friend.

The blonde lands feet first on Charlie’s feet for just a second until Charlie, using Sadie’s momentum, rebounds the 16 year old by extending his leg just as Sadie stands on his own.

The power of both their legs sends Sadie soaring into the air. Just as he hits the height of his jump he screams out for Bailey’s attention. “SKY HOOK!”.

Bailey catches Sadie mid air by the wrists in an air tight grip. Using their mutual momentum, Bailey swings Sadie in a circle. Every putty Sadie Passes he uses powerful kicks to knock their heads clean off their shoulders leaving nothing but pebbles and dust.

The two slow to a stop just in time to see the surrounding putties crumble to merely nothing. They are soon joined by the rest of the gang.

“You’ve been working on that move haven’t you?” Kealey gives Charlie a playful punch on the shoulder.

Before Charlie can respond, the ground around them erupts in explosive force, sending the teens soaring onto their backs. They stand together, strong.

Each one a little out of breath. Through the hanging smoke from where they once stood comes what could very well be the love child of a rat and toaster. Flanked on both sides by more putties.

“You’d think they’d run out of those boulder brains,” Ryan says. “But no, they just keep on coming.”

Without warning a group of putties push their way through the Rangers. Heir faces are a horrid blend of clay and rock. These are clearly not the putties we are used to. Their hands are sharpened into blades, clearly ready for a taste of blood.

Haley blocks a punch to her face. “What do you know, they come in extra large too.” She dodges a kick and delivers a heavy hit to his abdomen. “But seriously, who invited these crashers?”

Charlie elbows one in the neck while simultaneously kicking another heavy in the chest. “C’mon Haley, what’s a villain without his lackeys.”

Sadie rolls over one of the supercharged putties back to back and falls into a split to avoid a blade to the face. The blade in turn gets lodged into a tree. “Charlie, I believe the term you are looking for is villain support.” He rises and knees the puttie in the stomach and rips him away from the tree, tossing him into a fellow foot soldier.

“You’re not actually fighting for the ethical treatment of the guys who are trying to annihilate us, are you?” Ryan rams two of them together, knocking them to pieces, then turns around to nail one right in the face.

As is by plan the putties all join together and throw the rangers back .They truly are stronger than any other putties that the rangers have faced before.

Bailey, determined, stands to his feet. “You thinking what I’m thinking?”

“I think it’s time to breakout the hardware.” Ryan says with a sideways smile. Clearly these guys have some tricks up their sleeves.

“Let’s do it guys.” Bailey moves to the front, clearly the leader of the team. “IT’S MORPHING TIME!”

The teens reveal wrist mounted morphers with a brilliant glow of light. The light swallows each of them whole for a mere seconds. In a wash of confusion the putties shield their eyes. When they look again, the see a terrifying site- THE MIGHTY MORPHIN POWER RANGERS.

Clad in high tech armor, each of the teens is a powerhouse of agility, strength, brains, and heart. They are the legendary Power Rangers of Angel Grove, asserted by Zordon of Eltar to defend the planet against the invaders from other galaxies.

Without warning the putties begin to swarm the rangers in a swell of courage. The five of them part ways, each one taking on their own special group.

Charlie, clad in her armor as the green ranger, does and impressive back kick, and using his momentum flips forward and lands another kick right into the chest of another putty. Both of them explode into clay pieces before dissolving into dust. He then goes after another with a few punches to the gut. The putty gets in one lucky shot and Charlie falls back. With a quick turn, he reveals a large axe.

”Sorry dude, you’ve been cut!” He laughs from behind his mask. Even he knew that it was a cheesy line.

With a giant swing the axe slices through him, exploding him into dust.

Ryan and Sadie both cross each other with back hand springs before being trapped in a circle of putties. The Yellow of Sadie’s uniform and the Blue of Ryan’s seem to glow against the dark dank gray of the putties. The two rangers, locking arms back to back, decide to make the best of teamwork. Ryan swings Sadie around, while he seemingly walks across their chests sending a domino effect of dissolving minions. With his feet firmly on the ground, Sadie bends over allowing Ryan to roll of his back and slam into two more oncoming putties. Dust.

They stand back to back and turn in a circle revealing their weapons as well. Ryan, holding his lance takes one two more putties before splitting it into two and slashing them across the chest, turning them to dust.

Sadie, using his daggers, battle two putties and their sword like hands with an array of moves before a swift slam of his daggers into their chests, causing another eruption of dust.

Haley, in her Pink Ranger uniform, runs straight into a tree, up it’s trunk, and then kicks off with he feet, somersaulting over two putties. The second they turn around she jumps into the air and kicks the both of them in the chest.

As they explode behind her she turns around and cartwheels between four putties. She gains her feet and turns around to reveal her bow. With a few flicks of the wrist she skewers the four putties with an arrow seemingly made of light. They burst into dust within a second

“Some people just don’t know the power of pink!”

Bailey, in red, with a devastating combos of punches takes out four putties before being grabbed on both arms by another duo. He uses their own weight against them and swings the two into each other. Dazed the let go and he pulls of a double kick, landing both of them in the chest. They crumble into a heap of cold rock.

He turns to face another set of goons, this time holding a powerful sword. They are no match for him and in a few swipes, are nothing but gravel. Just as he gets back to his feet and turns around, the Rat Toaster is there, leering with three more putties. Bailey doesn’t flinch.

“Hey there good lookin, you going my way?”

“Prepare to face the wrath of RATOASTA!” He snarles throu mangled metal teeth.

“Really?” Baily holds back a laugh. This guy had to be at the bottom 5 of Zedd’s legion of followers. Still, the red ranger knew not to underestimate an alien with a vendetta. “Alright, show me what you’ve got!”

Using dizzying amounts of kicks and punches, Bailey goes hand to hand with the monster. His armor seemingly emits light as a sword appears in his hand. He gets in a few good gashes before he is whipped with a thick black attachment that Bailey was almost positive to be modeled after a power chord from hell.

Just as he falls back to recover, Sadie and Haley jump in and try to double team him. They fall back as well leaving the Ryan and Charlie to take a turn. They land in a few more hits than the rest but end up being tossed back as rag dolls as well. The team gains footing again together. It’s time to break out the big guns.

“Alright rangers! Let’s Bring em together!” Bailey calls out to his friends. Each one of them pulls their weapons in and combines them together. The Axe, Bow, Sword, Lance, and Daggers all meld into a small cannon.

Red stands behind it, joined by Pink and Green on his left and Blue and Yellow on his right. The power between them pulses through the air, creating a currant that connects with the blaster in front of them. Bailey doesn’t hide the smile growing behind his helmet.

This was probably the best after school job he could ever ask for. He makes a difference, saves the world. And more importantly, he has made friends that are closer than family. Nothing on this earth could stop him from protecting that.

“FIRE!”

...

To be continued: http://rangerboard.com/showpost.php?...71&postcount=9

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Old 12-24-2008, 08:42 PM   #3
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An interesting start. I like it and the movie style of the story. I like the feel of that characters that was presented and of course, I can't wait to see how they are further developed.

However, I did notice a few things that stood out.

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Sitting on the ground, reading from a copy of ‘Sense and Sensibility’. is Sadie at 16 he shines brightest out of the group...
I believe the period is supposed to be at the end of 'Sensibility' and 'At' being the start of the new sentence.

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Charlie, clad in her armor as the green ranger...
You referred to Charlie as female. And there was one point in the story you spelled Bailey as "Baily". Other than that, I say good job.
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fixed. I should mention Charlie was a girl in the first draft so these slip ups might happen with his descriptions.
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fixed. I should mention Charlie was a girl in the first draft so these slip ups might happen with his descriptions.
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that was a great start. and the new ranger's morpher's are wrist mounted. no power coins?
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coins are on the wrist morphers. kinda like NS
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Old 12-24-2008, 10:45 PM   #8
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awesome. I would love a drawing if you have one. if not, i can imagine it. can't wait for a story on White, Purple, and Orange.
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Old 12-25-2008, 06:53 PM   #9
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Power Rangers The Movie: Return of The Ooze Part Two

Here is it, part two- but first one of many trailers for an upcoming fan fiction by FlashmanX(just like real movies! lol)

Dark Zeo Rising


Angle Grove Penitentiary

SLAM!!

A tall dark haired man dressed in prision threads burst through a door. He turns down the hall and runs past a bunch of cells with inmates yelling for him to let them out.
He enters the stairway and stops to catch his breath. Freedom is within his grasp if he can only figure out how to get out of here. The alarm is sounded and the intercom clicks on. "All units theres been an escape from death row. Lockdown the facitlity. I repeat lock down the facitlity. A prisioner has escaped from death row."
"Shit." He curses aloud and takes off down the stairs. A group of police burst into the stairwell from floor 2. "freeze." He jumps over the rail and lands in front of the entrance to floor one just as two officers push there way into the stairwell. With all his strength he spears into the policemen before they could react. They slam into the wall and are knocked out. Quick thinking grabs a fallen officer and unholsters his gun.
A group of policemen and women enter the room from all sides drawing there weapons.

"Freeze kiner. Your surrounded." Says the police chief.

"Never." Kiner scoffs "I ain't letten you inject me. Now stand back or I blow his freakin head off." Kiner says as he uses the officer for a shield and rises the gun to his temple while releasing the safety.

"He has Mendoza." The chief says "Let him through."

Kiner slowly backs around and creeps to the door making sure not to drop eye contact with the chief while gripping his captive tightly. The police circle him weapons still trained on him but allow him to exit the building.

"Theres no where you can go Kiner." The chief informs him. "Let Mendoza go and give it up. Don't make this harder on yourself"

"Harder. Ha. you were about to exicute me like a puppy with rabies. How could it be any harder?"

"The min you kill him were going to fire. Lethal injection is a better way to die than a bullet through the skull."

"At least I got to see the outside one last time." Kiner mumbles and breaks officer Mendozas neck. He then turns to run. The officers let out a "No, Mendoza." They begin to fire but before the bullets reach there target a red streak of light pulls Kiner from the scene."

The police cease there fire. "Were the hell did he go?" The chief gasp is amazement.


Stone Canyon National Bank

The Stone Canyon National Alarm sounds and two figures burst through the front door holding bags of money. One man and one woman dressed all in black and wearing Bill and Hillary mask jump into a red convertable and make there getaway.

"Floor it baby." The man says pulling his mask off to reveal his handsome blond features.

"This is the score of a lifetime." The woman says as she removes her mask revealing her pretty dark haired features. She guns it down the road as police sirens can be heard giving hot persuit.

"Yeah baby yeah." She squeals excitedly as she leans in and kisses her man.

"Pay attention to the road doll." He warns her. "We need to take 52nd and fast the trains coming soon and we need it to block those pigs."

"Hold on baby time for a little distraction." She floors it through a red light causing a truck and car to collide. "That should keep a few of em busy. Woo yeah." She hydroplans into the exit at 52nd street cutting off a ups truck and nearly causing another wreck.

"Theres the tracks and the train baby were nearly home free." The guy says as he fires a couple of shots at the two remaining cop cars in chase.

Just then a green and yellow streak of light grabs them from there car and it crashes into the passing train with enough impact to derail overturn some train cars.

The cops stop and get out and rush the scene. One calls for backup, medics and, and fire trucks. "Hey." A female cop says as she examines the demolished convertable still with all the money in it. One of the bags caught fire. "Where did they go?"



Angel Grove High Junior class 4th period Gym class

A basketball game is taking place. Shirts and skins. A bulky black male on the skins team checks a kid on shirts team knocking him to the ground and takes the ball. Shoots the layup and laughs. "Ha ha, My points bitch." He gloats.

"Hey Tommy, you did that on purpose." The clearly smaller kid says with a wimper as he pulls himself back up. "Thats a foul."

"Hey its a contact sport." Tommy says as he pushes the kid back to the floor.

"Hey Freeman." The coach yells "I'm tired of your bullying Go to the principles office now. Thats your last strike your suspended"

"You can't suspend me." Tommy angrily pipes tossing the basket ball hard at the teacher knocking him in the head and sending him to the ground.

"Your out of control man chill out." Another kid from the skins team approches coming to his coaches aid with a few of his friends.

"Mind your bussiness punk." Tommy demands and punches the kid in the face. Another kid tackles Tommy to the ground and his friends join him in holding him down.

Then a streak of blue light wisk Tommy away.

"What the hell just happen." Says the coach pulling himself up



Somewhere in Angel Grove in an alley.

"Life is a dark abismal void of existance." Say a Emo girl dressed all in a Nightmare before christmas shirt with black lipstick and fingernails and jet black hair.
"Stupid Natalie and her new parents. Damn orphanage. I don't need anybody." She whins as she pulls out a knife and begins to slit her wrist.
She slumps back against the cold stone wall dropping the knife and bleeding out from her wrist.

A pink streak of light teleports her away.



ITS BEEN 5 MONTHS

Five months since The dark Lord Serpos stole the golden power staff. Highjacked Pyramidis and made his way to Earth. Five months since he recruited his new army and vowed to find the Zeo Sub Crystals and obtain absolute power.

Five months since five teens realized there destiny and took up the mantle of the Power Rangers. Five months since they joined The Purple and Green Kakurangers and vowed to defend the planet from Serpos and stop him at all cost.

Five months fighting monsters of the day. Some battles won and some battles lost. All the while searching for the elusive Zeo Sub Crystals.

Its been two days since Serpos pinpointed the ocation of the Zeo Crystals and stormed Ninjors sanctuary taking the cyrstals ans laying the ninja master.


Five multicolored lights appear in Pyramidis

"Where the bloody hell are we?" Kiner grunts looking at his new surrounding.

"Looks like we were abducted." says Tommy "who are you guys?"

"I'm John and this is Kelly. " Says the man dressed in black
"Baby where the fuck is our money?" Kelly beams angrily

"Help me. I've died and gone to bad sci fi channel movie." Says the Emo girl

"Hey girl." Says Tommy "I like em a little freaky."

"Don't call me a freak. The names Rain." Rain replys shoving his advancing hand aside. "Hey, My hands there not bleeding anymore. I'm healed."

Just then a door opens and in steps a red demon and cat like lady.
"Lord Serpos will see you now." Nefel cackles with a laugh

The Dread Lord Serpos makes his entrance. "I have finally achieved my goal of finding the Zeo Crystals. You shall wield its power and destroy those who stand in my way of total universal control.
You shall kill the Destiny Knights."

IN 2009 EVILS DESTINY WILL BE FULLFILLED

A lightning like multicolored light burst and Kiner, John, Kelly, Tommy and, Rain henshin into the Dark Zeo Rangers

"Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha." Serpos cackles

POWER RANGERS DESTINY KNIGHTS




As always Ernie’s café is bright and lively with excitement. Teenagers gather around the juice bar, breaking through them is Sadie. He dons an orange tee shirt with the café’s logo. Almost tripping, he carries a tray of drinks over to a table. There sits Haley and Charlie. The two rangers are looking on at a TV on the wall.

“… thanks to the Power Rangers, nobody was harmed. In other news, tonight is the arrival of Orion’s Comet. Make sure you have a good seat to see it up close and personal. Also, don’t miss the meteor shower following it tomorrow night.” The reporter on the television finishes before someone changes the channel to a pulsating music video.

Charlie and Haley turn their focus to Sadie.

Charlie smiles brightly. “And the snacks have arrived! Who wants ketchup?”

Haley poises her camera. “Strike a pose Sadie!”

Almost blinded by the flash, Sadie takes a seat next to his friends. “What was that for?”

“School Paper.” She grabs a soda from the tray. “We’re doing an article on after school jobs and how they affect your schoolwork.”

“Is this about my C in Biology?” Sadie drops a french fry from his mouth. “Because I’m telling you, Mr. Callman has it out for me.”

Charlie laughs. “That’s what you say every year.” He mimics Sadie’s voice. “All my science teachers hate me because I’m sooo eco friendly!”

Haley throws her head back and laughs. “That’s not what I meant!” She tucks a strand of her red hair behind her ear. “I just needed a picture, honest!”

“Sure,” Sadie shrugs it off. “But while you’re getting Science scholarships, I’ll be getting new shoes.”

On the Patio overlooking a beautiful ocean sunset is Bailey and his younger brother Freddie. Freddie is wearing crisp white karate regalia in a high contrast to Bailey’s tee shirt and jeans. Fred does an impressive kick through the air and follows through with a flawless roundhouse.

He then looks to his older brother who seems to be just short of a full understanding. “You see, simple.”

Bailey nods with a weak smile and preps himself for a kick. He swings his leg around and sloppily cuts through the air before barely landing on his feet for mere seconds before stumbling backwards a few steps.

“That was…” Fred crosses his arms over his chest. He was far too serious for a 12 year old. “interesting.”

Ryan approaches the two and hands them bottles of crisp water. “Dang Freddie, that’s cold.”

“What can I say, I’m hopeless.” Bailey gives his fellow ranger a knowing wink.

“You’re not hopeless, you just need some practice.” Freddie takes a sip of his water.

“Thanks dude, I’ll keep working on it.”

Freddie give his brother a playful kick in the shin. “You better, or else I’ll have to teach you a lesson in pain!”

Bailey laughs to himself. “You know, you’re the only kid your age that can make his brother believe he can beat him up.” The red ranger takes a long drink from his water and recaps it.

Ryan puts a hand on Freddie’s shoulder. “Why don’t you go get changed and hang with your friends.”

“Are you guys trying to ditch me” Freddie questions.

“No, dude” Ryan looks at Bailey, unsure of the answer.

Bailey recovers. “We just figured you guys had plans for the comet tonight.”

“And you’re cool if I go by myself?”

“Go for it, just don’t tell Mom.”

“Sweet!” With that Freddie is off to change. Bailey turns his attention to Ryan as they make their way over to the table where the rest of the team sits.

“Nice kick grasshopper.” Haley welcomes them with her signature wit.

“You can call me the karate kid, thank you very much!” Red takes a seat. “I didn’t see you complaining about my moves this afternoon.”

“Yeah, what was up with that? That rat went down way too easy.” Sadie speaks up.

“I dunno, but they definitely brought their A game.”

“Oh, the eagle has landed…” Charlie nods to the entrance of the beach patio.


Swaggering in from the indoor game room is Bulk and Skull. Every school had a pair of goons like these. They were insensitive jokers who took pleasure in being the bane of their communities existence.

“You snooze you loose princess!” Bulk pulls a handful of fries from a small girls plate in his mammoth paw. His large frame would be intimidating if he wasn’t the shape of a pumpkin clad in leather and denim.

His cohort in crime was a rail with a mass of spiky black hair. He thumps the girl on the forehead with a ghoulish laught. “Yeah! Snooze princess!!!”

Sadie stands to his feet and moves off after Bulk and Skull. They may look like they’re intimidating but one truw shot at authority would send them back into the corner to sneer at the crowd for the rest of the night. His small frame his soon backed up by Charlie’s rather large one. Sadie may have the authority, but Charlie brought the muscle to make sure they paid attention.

Just as the two are about to reprimand Bulk and Skull’s action, the Patio roars to life. The rangers look up at the sky as Orion’s comet begins to streak across the sky.

“Wait, isn’t this supposed to come a little later?” Haley looks at her watch. “It’s only 7:30…”

Nobody listens to her, they are all focused on the dazzling spectacle screaming across the sky. For a second the whole building falls into a hush, mesmerized by the beauty of a celestial phenomenon, until they realize that the comet isn’t just sailing over, ITS COMING CLOSER.

And uneasy moment passes between the crowd, instinctively Sadie and Charlie moved closer to their friends. “Is it…?” Charlie can’t even finish his sentence.

Before he can finish the thought a earth rumbling whailing begins to shake the room. Without a doubt, the comet is heading straight for the beach. The café was right in it’s path.

In a matter of seconds the Earnie’s Beachside Café begins to raise up in arms, customers running out in every direction. The rangers stand together, unsure of what they should do. The comet is coming fast, and there wouldn’t be enough time to initialize the Megazord to take it out.

“What do we do?” Ryan questions Bailey, dodging the last of the people heading out of the building.

“What can we do?” Haley grabs Ryan’s arm to brace herself.

“BRACE FOR IMPACT!”

The teens all crouch low to the wooden slats of the patio just in time to see the comet fly past them by mere feet. Seconds later a near deafening crash and quake knock all of them off their feet.

THE COMET HIT the beach only a few hundred yards away from the café with a resounding quake. The lights in the café flicker and go out for a second before coming back on.

“Freddie!” Bailey jumps to his feet. “I need to check and see if he’s okay.”

“I’ll go too.” The yellow ranger joins his friend as they head off into the main game room.

The rangers stand still, numb. They’re unsure of what to do, as if on cue, the alarm on their morphers go off.

Charlie answers. “What's up, Alpha?”

The mechanic voice of their robotic command center attendant Alpha Five echoes through the air. His voice is fighting through a rough case of static. “Rangers, we need you at the Command Center, L.R.N. !”

Ryan gives the other two rangers a puzzled look. Charlie returns it.

“It means like, right now.” Haley leans into the communicator. “We’ll be right there, Alpha.”

Bailey and Sadie return to the group.

“Did you find him?” Ryan questions.

“Yeah, he was in the locker room.” Bailey laughs to himself. “He didn’t even know what happened. I sent him home.”

“Good, we’re wanted at the command center.” Charlie taps his morpher.

“Wow, color me surprised.” Sadie jokes.

The teens hit their wrist-communicators and instantly transform into five iridescent columns of color. The columns shoot up through the sky and blast off over the city. Little to they know, a pair of eyes were watching them the whole time…


TO BE CONTINUED TOMORROW NIGHT AT 8:00

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Old 12-25-2008, 07:52 PM   #10
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Old 12-25-2008, 10:42 PM   #12
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The Crystal Comet.

LOL. All jokes aside, I liked this chapter as well and the inclusion of Bulk and Skull. And I like seeing a bit more of the characters' personalities outside of battle.
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Great stuff Bradlee, liking the modern take on this very much; i also like how we've only seen the Ranger side for a short while and you've focused on their teenager aspects, makes you relate to the characters more. The inclusion of Bulk and Skull was a nice touch too.

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Alright guys, here's one of two mega posts today. No trailer I am afraid, it's coming later.

Outside of town, in the California desert, hidden in the crags of rock formations hides a building that houses great power. To the untrained eye one would never notice it’s existence as it blends ever so slightly into the rocks surrounding it. This is the command center, helm of the arsenal of the Power Rangers.

Five streams of light streak across the starry sky and disappear inside the hidden fortress.

The rangers appear from the light, standing in the middle of a greeting room illuminated by large columns of light. The walls are covered in thick panels of perforated metal, glowing with an energy unknown to this world. This is merely a small portion of the Command Center.

The five teens move forward down the lighted walkway towards the ever growing roar of alarms. Within seconds the hall opens up two an larger, cavernous room filled with control panels and screens leading up two a large tube that looked to be filled with an electric current bouncing about like it was floating on rough waves.

From behind a control panel a four foot tall robot emerges and begins to push a flurry of buttons, trying it’s hardest to get the barrage of noises to stop.

ALPHA 5 works frantically amidst the array of computer banks. The rangers approach and Haley puts a hand on his domed head. “Alpha what’s going on?”

“AI YI YI!” Alpha’s body erupts with surprise. “A massive surge of cataclysmic energy is overloading the system’s mainframe!”

The electricity in the tube bursts into a pass of light, forming the body of a person. His skin is a light gray with sparkling of silver. This is Zordon of Eltar, mentor to the rangers.

He looks onto them with a grave expression on his alien face. “Rangers you must act now, the planet is in immense danger.”

Sadie steps to the front of the group and takes stance next to Bailey. “Danger from what? Does this have to do with the comet?”

The alarms die down to the usual myriad of faint beeps and blips that usually float through the air of the fortress.

Alpha Five pushes his metallic form through the rangers and directly up to Zordon’s tube. “Zordon! You can’t be serious, we can’t let them do this!”

Ignoring Alpha Five’s pleas, Zordon continues. “Yes Sadie. The comet housed an evil far greater than anything you have faced before. His name is Ivan Ooze”

Alpha tries once again to beg for their safety. “They’re not prepared Zordon, he’s too powerful!”

Strong minded as usual, Charlie ignore’s Alpha’s pleas as well. “Ivan Ooze? Who is he?”

“Thousands of years ago a group of warriors like yourselves imprisoned Ivan in a chamber of ice and discarded in him in space, to drift for eternity so that his evil would never surface again. But now he has returned.” Zordon turns away from the rangers. He knows everything Alpha is saying is true, but the world cannot fend for themselves on their own. They need the Power Rangers to protect them.

Against his best judgment, Zordon Delivers his orders. “The planet’s safe-“ He pauses. “The Entire Universe is at risk. You must make sure Ivan is returned to his chamber before he escapes and it’s too late.”



Back at the beach, a throng of citizens have gathered around the taped off comet. Police and Shore Guard alike have created a perimeter around the large chunk of ice, now billowing off curtains of steam in the warm summer night.

The air is filled with curious murmurs from the onlookers as well as the security personal as well. This is a new feat for Angel Grove. Usually when something from space comes to the city, it causes more destruction of public property.

Watching from the sidelines, a teenager with dark brown hair streaked with large chunks of red and purple walks slowly behind the people. Something about the way he moves is deliberate, precise. His pale blue eyes dance wildly in the lights of the security vehicles. This was soon going to turn into chaos, his favorite sport.

The teen reaches into his dark jeans and pulls out a small black pouch and pours some dust in his hands. After stuffing the pouch into his jeans again, he blows the powder into the wind. Lazily is drifts over the bystanders and officers. Within an instant they all fall silent; still as stone.

The teen jumps off the dune, triumphant. He moves through the crowd, pushing over the statuesque citizens to make way to get to the front. As soon as he sees there’s enough space, he raises a hand into the air and snaps his fingers three times.

Without a seconds wait, a portal of deep red light appears behind him. This was a portal to the most feared kingdom of the universe- the house of Zedd.

With this metallic clanks of his boots, Lord Zedd himself stepped out first. His blood red suit worked as a skin that covered his exposed organs and muscle, it was covered with the framing of chrome armor over it as well as the piping and cybernetic chords overrunning his limbs. These were what kept his body at peak strength. His face was covered with a thick metallic grill with piercing red visor that covered his eyes. The top was left open, exposing his rubbery gray brain.

He embodied fear and pain, and made sure that everybody he met was inflicted with the same torment he had discovered years ago when a quest for more power in an intergalactic war had him pay a steep price for top billing.

Behind him stepped his wife, Rita Repulsa. Her dark plum dress was accented with archaic gold writings and insignia. It hung seductively on her small yet powerful frame, capped with a gleaming chrome breast plate and large collar that rose up behind her head with thin pointed spikes.

Her silvery white hair was in deep contrast to her dark skin. It was whipped up in it’s tight curls on the back of her head, accentuated with a headpiece that notified her as the queen of the household, as well as signified her mystical convergence of the brain. She was a powerful witch before her encounters with earth and the Power Rangers.

They drove her to madness, shattering her mind and connection with the demon world that lured Zedd to her embrace. She was now a mere shell of the creature of darkness she used to be.

“Thrax, my son,” Zedd said, his voice like wet gravel grinding against the pavement. “You did well.”

The teenager scratched his forehead. “Whatever.” He pushed a person against a sand dune and sat on him like a bench and began to fiddle with a long necklace adorned with the family crest. “Can we go now, these people are even duller than those Kerovians back on KO-35.”

Rita spoke with a dreamy ignorance. “I liked them… they ran fast.” Her eyes narrowed viciously. “I love it when they run…”

With a flick of his wrist Zedd pushed the police barricades and tape away from the comet and took his steps toward it, followed by his bride.

As if stepping into a new world, Rita smiles widely, “I can hear him inside. He’s screaming to get out.”

Thrax rolls his eyes. “Another Saturday night and I'm traipsing around the galaxy with my psychotic step-mother from hell.”

Zedd grumbles to himself. “ingrateful..”

The trio stops in their track as another security guard makes his way over a sand dune and towards the egg. “Hey Kurt,” He doesn’t look up from a clipboard. “There’s nothing in the procedural manual about a comet crash, Should I call the boys at Stone Canyon?”

He looks up when his words are met with silence and his face twists in fear.

Thrax stands up and crosses his arms over his chest. Off the guard’s look. “I Know, some social life right? I’m not a child you’d think he’d let me chill at the castle all by myself but no, one little party and all of a sudden I’m a leaper in my own home…”

The young Zedd pauses and then lets out an awkward chuckle. “I’m betting you’re not horrified by my abundance of teen angst, are you?”

Without a word Zedd raises his ominous staff at the security guard and releases a quick zap of electricity. He falls lifeless and rolls down to the bottom of the dune. “I thought you took care of the guards. We don’t need those power parasites knowing about our presence.” He lowers his staff. “I guess if you want it done right you have to do it yourself.”

The portal opens once again and three more beings step out. They are Zedd’s top generals. Goldar, a golden armor clad beast that closely resembles a blue gorilla with his thick brow and large sharp teeth. Wielding a large golden sword he is the head of Lord Zedd’s army. With him are his left and right hand heads of company.

To his left is Scorpina, Goldar's mate, a deadly beauty with deep black and gold armor cascading in thin plates across her lithe body. Her chest adorned with a heavy red guard plate with the image of a scorpion on her helmet that has a long black braid of hair trailing out the back.

And at his right, Rito Revolto. Rita’s brother who had fallen in battle. She used her black magic to bring his rotting corpse back to life. Half his body was ripped flesh and the other was bare bone. To guard him he had large spiked shoulder pieces with the Repulsa family black rose insignia. He was a sadistic killer in life, but in death he became much worse. In short term- he liked to play with his food.

The three of them were all adorned with thick black capes, each one with the Zedd house crest on it. Goldar’s sat a bit heavier, concealing his large black wings. The whole lot of them were a sick twisted family.

Zedd turns to face his generals. “Status report, Goldar.”

Goldar’s red eyes glow mercilessly. “The rangers were nearby when the comet made contact. They must know he is here.”

“No doubt Zordon is already getting his men on the job.” Scorpina’s voice is slick and sour like poison.

“They’ll arrive at any time.” Goldar finishes.

“We mustn’t waste time then.” Zedd looks onto the comet with the malicious glee of a child on Christmas morning ready to open his gifts.

Zedd aims his staff at the huge mass of steaming ice and shoots a blast of energy. The comet erupts in a fury of snow. Webs of electric currents wipe over the entire mound of space debris, followed by a SWIRL OF BLACK SMOKE.

The group of evil conquerors fall back, unaware of the evil they have just unleashed. When the smoke clears all they see a bubbling iridescent black puddle of ooze. The family falls silent, save for Rita’s girlish muffled glee. Even in her insane elation, she stands behind her husband in fear.

Her voice shakes with fear and excitement. “Daddy’s home…”

As if in response, the ooze begins to boil and froth in a thick roll. It begins to grow in size with slithers and slurps. Slowly a towering form begins to be made by the swirling mass.

Thrax, hiding his growing insecurity, takes a step back from the scene. “Ew..”

The form begins to define itself as large and brooding. A face only a mother could love with short stubby horns and glistening silver teeth cap off a rather large body clothed in seemingly liquid hanging robes and black armor. Zedd himself had seen some horrific things in his day, but even this creature sent a shiver down his spine. This was the face of nightmares.

Ooze stretches his logs of arms wide into the air. Clawed fingers reaching towards the sky. After extending longer than any being should be able to, he silently pulls his hands back in and cracks his neck with a sickening pop. Then, suddenly aware of his present company, his focus drops on Zedd.

“Where am I?” Ivan’s voice was unnaturally calm. Like that of a lion waiting to lure in a lamb.

On their silence he takes a step out of the iced prison. “No please, don’t everyone talk at once.”

Shaken from his awe, Zedd speaks. “You are back on Earth.” Standing stalwart and strong, Zedd tries to give off a strength and authority. “I brought you back.”

“What year is it?”

“2008” Thrax replies. “Why? Did you leave a roast in the oven?”

Ignoring Thrax’s remarks, Ivan keeps an intense gaze on Zedd. “And why have you brought me here?”

“Do you recall Zordon of Eltar?”

Ivan's face goes dark. He raises his hands and released a roar from his chest that could rival the entire animal kingdom. A surge of energy explodes from his body, turning the stone like people into little more than black cinder.

Rito smiles at the quiet carnage with what little flesh and muscle he has on his face. “Seems to ring a bell.”

Zedd doesn’t shake. “I want you to destroy him so that I can claim this planet as my own.”

Ivan hisses through his jagged fangs. “I’ll massacre him and all he has held dear.” As the words sink in, Ivan begins to walk away... but stops. “You might want to consider looking for some property. I think the market will be opening up quite soon.” Darkness floats off of him, poising the air.

Rita Repulsa approaches him. With very simple, steady words, she speaks. “I want to hear the world scream.”

Ivan cups her chin in his hand. “And you shall.” He looks to Zedd, who is just barely beginning to show signs of jealousy. “But I will need something first.

“Name it.”



Five beams of light soar through the sky and materialize on uneven ground. The rangers are at the construction sight for the Millennium Monument. Due to be completed in 2010, the site was merely a skeleton of what it would eventually be.

The ground was freshly broken, but halted due to an unforeseen mass of metal and rock underneath the construction point. Zordon was sure that this was where Ivan’s initial headquarters used to reside.

The rangers had gone to the beach first, but unluckily found the remains of 20 citizens, 15 officers, and a newly cracked prison of ice with the remains of ooze fresh on the ground. Ivan had been released.

This was sure to be the first place he would come. And so the rangers would be here as well, ready to stop him.

“Are we even sure how bad this guy is?” Ryan begins to climb down the rock face to the construction site below. “I mean he’s gotta be pretty old by now. I bet he folds like a bitty baby!”

“Ryan,” Haley starts, carefully following him. “I am pretty sure he doesn’t age the same as we do.”

“Why do you say that?” The teen questions, helping her off the final rock.

Sadie, joining them as well, pushes his hair out of his eyes. “Because he’s not human? Just a wild guess.”

“C’mon guys, we have a job to do.” Bailey interjects and he and Charlie join the rest of them on the ground.

The five of them are all in their field uniforms. These were designed just in case the rangers were met with something inhuman that was possibly lethal The fabric was treated with Eltarian technology that could protect the wearer of any vile that was thrown at it. Especially ooze.

The jackets were a just like track jackets in charcoal gray with trimmings in the ranger’s respective color Underneath the jacket each ranger had their respective colored tee shirt and a pair of jeans treated with the same technology that their jackets had been subjected to.


The rangers all look about their surroundings. They’re surrounded by rock piles, pools of water and a plethora of building supplies. It looks like everything was just dropped without a warning.

Charlie puts his hands on his hips impatiently. He hated when the bad guys played hide and go seek. “Anyone see anything?”

Haley points over to another area of the site just over a small slope riddled with tools and a few trailers. “Let’s look over there.”

The team moves in unison across the open site, cautiously. The trailers come into closer view and the smearing of ooze can be seen around a hole that looks like it was ripped open bare handed as if it was made of nothing but tin foil and scotch tape.

The teens fall hushed. Incredulously, Baily touches the opening. “It looks like it was opened…” He traces his fingers over the opening. It was clear that the side was grazed with claws and grip points. “by hand.”

Uneasy, the teens check out the damage inside through the unnaturally large hole ripped through the side. “Do you see that?” Sadie speaks up from his baited breath. “ooze…”

“Hey!”

The teens all jump and turn to see a security guard. His uniform is a bit mussed with traces of Ooze and Blood around the neck. He half smiles and shakes his head. “You kids had me scared there for a second.”

“That makes two of us.” Charlie instinctively stands in front of Sadie and Haley.

“You haven’t by chance seen a big scary guy made of purple goop walking around here, have you?” Ryan asks, positive the guy would have no idea what they were talking about.

His assumption was correct. “ The only thing I've seen is you teenagers.” The way he spit out the word teenagers was close to offensive. The security guard turns his back on the teens. Something fishy is clearly going on, and the ranger’s know it.

The guard speaks again, this time with an uneasy madness. “And you know... if there's one thing in the world I reeeeally hate....”

“I think he’s about to hulk out…” Haley says to Sadie, who finds no humor in the situation.”

The security guard turns around, his face melting off in thin pads of flesh. “It’s TEENAGERS!”

The rangers jump back as the guard’s flesh falls off of his body, taking his clothes with it. Like he was slipping off a halloween costume, Ivan stands at full height.

“Oh,” Ryan chokes back his lunch. “That’s just gross.”

“You’re too kind.” Ivan’s voice is still unsettlingly calm. “Allow me to introduce myself. I am Ivan Ooze.”

“We know.” Bailey says, standing his ground. No newbie on the block was going to scare him. “Don’t get too comfortable, you’re going right back where you came from.”

“I can see nothing has changed here.” Ivan begins to pace a bit, choosing his words carefully. “ Teenagers are still insolent little snots who can’t keep their mouths shut. How about I shut them for you?”

“We’re not teenagers.” Sadie steps forward. He was small, but not afraid. “We’re the Power Rangers. And you, sir? You’re history.”

Ivan contorts his face in mock fear. “The power rangers? Oh what will I do.?” He looks them over reproachfully. “Power Rangers, huh? Zordon still using a bunch of brats for his rag tag group of heroes?”

He leans forward and stares Sadie down. “You’re just expendable goods. You think you’re the first group of teenagers with attitude that he’s had go up against me? I killed countless kiddies just like you who were more than easily replaced until that so called leader of yours got lucky.”

Charlie pulls Sadie back by the arm. The stakes were all too real now. They had rushed into this fight without listening to Alpha Five, and look where they were- fresh meat.

“What Zordon knew, and I am betting he didn’t tell you, is that I can churn out minions just like he can. You see I realized long before he did that all you need is a body and a brain- and you have your own little team.” Ivan advances on the rangers. The teens back up instinctively before they hit the trailer. “What do you say, you wanna meet my kids?”

Ivan raises both of his hands into the air and draws lightning from the sky. The rangers look on in horror as he takes the electricity pulsing through his body and shoots it into the ground.

The rangers instinctively jump out of the way just in time to avoid being struck. As the lighting digs it way into the ground, the earth begins to shake violently.

It isn’t until they focus on the area they were standing that they discover that it was all freshly turned dirt.

Ivan’s voice whips them from their focus. “I’ll leave you to tend to my children. They get a little testy, so don’t be afraid to be firm…” He begins to walk away. “Not that it’ll do much good for you.”

Just as the rangers jump to their feet to follow Ivan, they’re grabbed by arms shooting up from the earth. Crusted in dirt and stained with black and purple ooze, they grip blindly at the rangers.

Charlie and Ryan, and Haley get up easily, but Bailey and Sadie are stuck. Charlie jumps into the thick of it and grips Bailey by the arms and begins to pull him up. It seems to work until more hands shoot up from the ground and grab at Charlie.

Haley and Ryan both take one of Sadie’s arms and pull him with all their might. The same happens to Pink and Blue as it did with Green.

“What do we do?!” Ryan calls out, desperate for an answer as he tries to fight of a hand reaching for his neck.

“We have to try harder!” Haley’s words are lost in Sadie’s screams. He’s up to his chest inside the dirt.

“HALEY!” Sadie gets one last scream in before he disappears

“SADIE!” She screams after him and begins digging against the dirt.

Charlie finally feels like he has gotten a good grip on Bailey. “Hold on buddy, I’m gonna get you out of here!”

“LET GO!” Bailey yells, up to his waist.

“WHAT?” Ryan Haley and Charlie all say at once.

“TRUST ME!”

Against all his intuition, Charlie lets go of Bailey, and the Red Ranger is instantly pulled under. The remaining three rangers now work on getting themselves free of the monstrous grip.

“What now?” Haley asks, looking to Charlie, her head just above the dirt as she grabs for something. Before any answer she is sucked underneath the dirt, followed soon by Ryan.

Charlie is a mix of emotions, in front of him, everybody he loved was destroyed. It’s too much to fight anymore, up to his neck in the dirt.

The Green ranger lets go and falls under the earth.

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Old 12-27-2008, 05:53 PM   #19
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nice job. it's darker than i had thought it would be. a nice surprise. and i like the morpher design as well.
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Old 12-28-2008, 12:33 PM   #20
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Nice chapter. The description of Zedd and his family was what stood out in the chapter, keep it up.
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